Hobbies

My hobbies are heaps of sport, I play rugby, softball, cricket, basketball, tennis and swimming. Some others are playing the piano, playing on my psp and playing on the computer.

Good Kaden, but any briefer with your words and you'll be me! Don't forget to put "flesh on the bones." You could mention how long you have been involved with the hobbies, how you got involved, why you enjoy them. Expand your thoughts.